Concurranceness.

Nice job, dude. I cant really find any flaws in this movie, EXCEPT... the camerawork in the intro could have been done better. It was a little sketchy. Other than that, all was awesome. I agree with the guy below me in saying my favorite part was the grabbing it in your mouth and then flinging him against the couch. Very nice job on this. DEFINITELY worth the effort.

Do you want me to step out side?

Fuck.

GRR111

thats clever what u did with stage 15... refresh? nice...

scary good... i love it

Wow. Read the entire thing from beginning to end and you think, "how many humans would it take to stretch from here to the end of the universe?" Do the math. im sure it will amaze anybody. Anyway, awesome flash. 5/5 10/10

Nice

Dude i love this game! seriously this is the only one that lasts long enough for me to come... i love that you have all the elements in there: vaginal, anal, lactation, titfucking, blowjobs, and all those positions! dude, this is a porn masterpiece. (i have played it like 3 times, no joke)

a little slow...

i dont mean slow in the speed sense of the term. i mean it doesnt seem to have enough going on, especially with the sense of intensity that the title implies. you might like to add a little more percussion in, well, everywhere except the vocal parts, and in genereal make it a little more exciting. try subdividing the quarters into something like trilled sixteenths, or even 32nds if you feel compelled to. i think if you experimented with those ideas, you could have a masterpeice on your hands.

sincerely,
your fellow musician

i enjoyed it...

you did a really good job making it sound like you meant what you were playing, with it being improvisation and all. improvements? i dont think there is much to be said in that department. dont get me wrong, its not perfect, but i cant really think of anything wrong with it, if that makes any sense. i think you should see if you can find an orchestral composer/arranger and see if they can turn this into an orchestral piece. anyway, definitely one of the more pleasant songs on the audio portal.

sincerely,
your fellow musician

wow

i think other than the fact that its just too short,u need to burn this to a CD. when u die, present this to the angel guarding heaven, and he will beg you to go in! very nice!

pretty cool

well, i love KH too, so im obligated to score this highly XD. nah actually its awesome, really. two things, though.
1. i would prefer the character to have a bit more of a halloween town feel, as in add a mask, some darker clothes, and maybe not look so much like riku, although i do like you defied the square enix norm of long, freaky hair.
2. just a suggestion: make a keyblade master from worlds like TWTNW, pride lands, or castle oblivion would be really cool, too.
anyway, all in all, nice submission.