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a little slow...

i dont mean slow in the speed sense of the term. i mean it doesnt seem to have enough going on, especially with the sense of intensity that the title implies. you might like to add a little more percussion in, well, everywhere except the vocal parts, and in genereal make it a little more exciting. try subdividing the quarters into something like trilled sixteenths, or even 32nds if you feel compelled to. i think if you experimented with those ideas, you could have a masterpeice on your hands.

sincerely,
your fellow musician

Chaoticstyle responds:

yeahh i threw it together in a few hurs. but ty ill look into it :)

i enjoyed it...

you did a really good job making it sound like you meant what you were playing, with it being improvisation and all. improvements? i dont think there is much to be said in that department. dont get me wrong, its not perfect, but i cant really think of anything wrong with it, if that makes any sense. i think you should see if you can find an orchestral composer/arranger and see if they can turn this into an orchestral piece. anyway, definitely one of the more pleasant songs on the audio portal.

sincerely,
your fellow musician

Darkmaster603 responds:

I would do an orchestral version, which did cross my mind after uploading, but I like it better like this. It's meant to be a fun little tune that sounds immature, musically speaking. This isn't anything like my usual genre, and I have some orchestrated works on here which I;m very proud of.

Thanks for the review!

wow

i think other than the fact that its just too short,u need to burn this to a CD. when u die, present this to the angel guarding heaven, and he will beg you to go in! very nice!

SessileNomad responds:

ill give that a shot...when i die...

Well,,,

Definitely worth an 8. However, there are a few bad things. Like for one, although i liked the whole bass addition, i dont appreciate the way you changed up the piano part. Not the melody, but the actual way the piano sounded. I loved the alterations to the guitar part, though. Also, at about 1:30 into the song, i liked the way the piano and guitar coincided. Pays excellent tribute to the original. Overall, pretty good job.

ScottStedman responds:

Well, the piano loops were recorded off of a Boston Grand Piano :) . I like to play the piano myself.

But thanks very much for the comment and rating :)

GO.

NICE! as usual, of course. not much to say, except for that same quality with the vocals as Forever Gamer, and great sequencing!

SkyMarshall responds:

Aaaand that made it all worthwhile :)

Not Bad

Nicely Done, although it could use a bit more similarity to the original, though it sounds a good bit like it. all in all, well played.

entezflare responds:

Thanks, i might try to make another remix, a little more....original-ish
Thanks for the review
~Entez

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